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Old 04-11-2005, 04:43 PM
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That story was made up by you? The part with Tomoyo was dumb!!!!!!!! And MEAN! Gosh. :angry:

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Old 12-14-2005, 03:04 AM
Hey Sakura...guess who?

I just wanted to make a grammatical corection in your story...When you type dialogue, you're SUPPOSE to start a new paragraph when I new person begins to talk...

Ex.
"I love you," the dying James Potter admitted.
"I don't," Lily Evans replied cruelly and walked away.

hope that helped...

[i like the angsty-ness of it too!]

doesnt it suck when he knows how much
you care about *him* and he doesn't do a thing about it
because he doesn't care at all? </3
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Old 12-14-2005, 03:19 AM
Yes yes, please excuse the gramatical errors. This was written like a year ago when I first started blogring.
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Old 01-25-2006, 01:13 AM
Don't get mad at them...they're only helping- the grammar thing is right thought...other than that really angst sad story, the beginning is kinda weak though.
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Old 12-09-2006, 03:58 PM
aww what a sweet story. =] i just wish they didn't commit suicide...
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