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[ashes1534]

this is a graphic i made and submitted to cb, they rejected it ; ( anyone have any sugestions?

[Light Disciple]

It's a little crowded. I understand what you were going for though. Maybe if you focused more on an image rather than the words. You also need careful placement of the splotches. Those should be done in a corner where you can do a few. they will have more impact that way. The swirls are too prominent so we can't see the needle exactly. The colors are cool though.

[I3xzLiLChicQ]

i agree with the above comment it's really crowded and the word beautiful is being overpowered by all the brushes. I like how nightmare seems more prominent. The swirls behind the B are also not working for me. I think you made the opacity too low for beautiful. Make it higher so the brushes don't overpower it or move the brushes around like the above poster said, to better positions.

I like the color choices though and the choice of font and everything.

[shmuggy]

^^What they said. It's more word art than it is a picture, if you know what i mean. But also, in the background the colors are yellow/orange and red, then in the word 'Beautiful' they turn pink and it kind of clashes, along with the brushes.

[cellosweet x)]

to me, it all seems a bit too random. try to make it flow better. if you only use a few splats, you can have a better effect.

[ji_cabinx]

like everyone else said, it's crowded and random. think about what you're trying to portray with this, and focus on that. simplicity is beauty =)