Poison

[trashhhxwhore]

ungrateful gentleman
where art thou scent of love dwelling
inside your cursed lips
pulsating venom deeply embedded
bite down hard release the poison
i f*cked up the mirror that brought
you the bad luck, it ended sacred
and lost confined and dropped
harder than your heart would have expected
your the breakable warning on the back of
a fragile heart that needs repairing
some assembly required before we kiss your
cursed lips

[BloodPromiser]

Ooh, lovely. It's strange. Take that as a compliment.
This sounds like a poem my teacher would make us do a line-to-line analysis on.

[[hello lover.] teenage dirtbag.]

Originally Posted by BloodPromiser

Ooh, lovely. It's strange. Take that as a compliment.
This sounds like a poem my teacher would make us do a line-to-line analysis on.

i totally agree. =]
i love this piece...keep it up