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Old 01-02-2008, 01:54 AM
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Everything I am, everything I've done and everything I've become, its for you.
I've thought so many perilous thoughts about you, dreamt so many dreams in which I was your prince charming, you my princess.
And all these years I tried to deny how I felt, but take a look at me now, look in my eyes, do you see how you've broken me?
Never have I been so vulnerable, so foolish, giving in to every whim.
My longing for you grows with each day, I'd give up my life just to see your face again, to feel the softness your skin, and hear your beautiful voice calling out my name.
Will you ever know how I feel? Will I ever be able to call you mine? Can I ever forget you?

Honor, Glory, Death...
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Old 01-05-2008, 02:53 AM
I like it =) but it makes me sad...

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I was your prince charming
Wait, so its from a guy's point of view then?

my angel whispers in my ear
and tells me what i want to hear.
my angel looks into my eyes
and i believe all his lies.
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Old 01-06-2008, 04:47 AM
yea it is from a guys point of view

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