The Last Kiss

[LdytrippstuhxD]

chapter 1 - It's Over

" I'm Sorry Jack but it's over."
" what!?.. wh.. why?"
" I'm Sorry, good bye"

And he stood there thoughtless as she gave him one last kiss and said goodbye with no explanation of what had just happened.

As Jack stood there crushed, the girl of his dreams had just left with no reason.
What they had lasted 2 years and now its over, did it mean nothing to Alexia?
Were the best 2 years of their lives just nothing to her?
He was heartbroken and no words could describe the pain he felt.

He dropped to the floor, tears pouring out.

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[hehe_itz_roseyy]

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[shining_angel]

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[LdytrippstuhxD]

THE REST OF CHAPTER 1

Jack finally got up after what seemed like 2 hours of crying at the park where Alexia and him first met.
He walked home painfully knowing that all hope is gone. When he gets home he lays on his bed and crys himself to sleep.

*[ Alexia's POV]*

I cant believe what i just did im such a fool. And she then also cries herself to sleep, but why?

---back to jack's pov---
It was morning already, oh boy school's going to be a drag.
Jack walked to school which took him only a few minutes because his house is only a few blocks away.
When he got there he saw Alexia and stopped her to ask her why she dumped him.
She avoided him.
"Alexia come on what's going on, I just want to know why you broke up with me."
"Jack go away I dont want to talk to you, this is hard enough as it is already so just leave me alone."
What the heck did she mean by its hard enough as it is? I mean she's the one that broke my heart how does she think I feel?

*[ Alexia's POV]*
" I wish I could tell him but I just can't. I love him so much, he doesn't realize how much this hurts me too."
----*FLASHBACK*----
"Alexia I love you," said Drake her exboyfriend.
" Drake I'm sorry but I've moved on, I'm in love with Jack now."
"No you're not, you know you want me."
"No I don't, ugh DRAKE LET GO OF MY ARM"
*Not untill you're mine"
"DRAKE STOP YOU'RE HURTING ME"
"LOOK IF I CAN'T HAVE YOU NO ONE CAN! YOU HEAR ME!? HUH!? NO ONE CAN!"
then he pushes her to the floor
"DRAKE WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?"
"BECAUSE I LOVE YOU"
"IF YOU LOVE ME THEN LET ME GO"
"NEVER, if you don't be my girl your special friend JACK will be hurt permanently"
"WHAT!? how can you be so cruel?"
"It's just the way things are babe"
"I'll never be your girl!"
"Alright then you asked for it tomorrow Jack's gonna be missing"
" WAIT I'll do it"
"okay you break up with him tomorrow and DONT TELL HIM ANY OF THIS or JACKIE HERE gets hurt"
----*FLASHBACK OVER*----
Alexia runs away to the restroom crying like crazy

[hehe_itz_roseyy]

ok .. good chapter`` well written and all`` =]=]=]

but.. uhh.. what happened?? it wasn`t that detailed..

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[hehe_itz_roseyy]

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[iVeSlUvYa]

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[faded*dreamz]

i love it post more more....

[Ninax]

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