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Old 08-12-2008, 12:27 AM
Whoah, what?
I'm so lost.
How did she get in the underground parking lot?

Update please!

By the way, New Classic, I always enjoy reading your posts. =)
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Old 08-14-2008, 06:01 PM
Chapter 7
*cough cough* Dust, was the first thing I smelled. I couldn't see anything, my eyes were blindfolded. My hands and legs were tied from behind. I tried to get myself up on my knees, but I had no more energy. The ground was cold and felt like it was draining all the heat from my body.

*Gasps, gasps* DAMNIT! NOT NOW.. my heart... I tried to breath in big breaths of air, but felt that my heart was numb.

"What's wrong with her?" I heard someone said. It was a girl's voice, and sounded quite familiar.

"I don't know. What should we do?" Now it was a man's voice.

"HEY! STOP FAKING IT BITCH!" She screamed. But I couldn't help but keep gasping.

".... fck, go get her some water.." The girl said. Foot steps wander away and soon came back.

"Here.." He said, I felt water and started drinking from the cup that was placed on my lips. *cough cough* I took big breaths and was finally able to calm down.

"Where am I? And who are you?" I asked.

"Let's let you have a look. You, go untie her blindfold." She ordered. Someone came over and took off the cloth that covered my eyes. First it was blurry, then my eyes began to adjust to the gloomy lighting. I looked around. We were in an old warehouse. Everything looked run down. A light beam of sunlight peeked in through a crack on the wall. That was about the only light source in the room. I looked over to the a girl sitting on a wooden chair staring at me. It was the same girl who had kissed Jin. There were three men standing behind her.

"What do you want from me?" I asked them.

"What I want? Who said I wanted anything? I could get anything I want. It's what I need." She said and began to take out a cigarette.

"Light me." She turned around to the man standing behind her and he lit her cigarette. She took in a puff and let go.

"Let me tell you something. You need to stay away from Jin. You have no rights to be near him. He doesn't even like you, he's with me right now." She said.

"I can be with anyone I want, I don't need permission from someone like you!" I replied.

"You bitch. You need someone to show you your place don't you?" She said. A man standing behind her came over and slapped me. I looked back at her.
"You don't deserve him. I don't know what's going on between you two, but I'm not giving him up." I said. She got up from her chair and slowly walked over to me.

"Say that one more time." She said. I stared straight into her eyes.

"I'm not giving him up." I repeated. She punched me.

"You wanna repeat that for me?" She said.

"I'm NOT giving him up." I said again.

"You're a stubborn girl aren't you?" She said and turned around and started walking away.

"Beat her till shes dead. I don't want to see her face anymore." She said and kept on smoking. The men came at me. One of them took a empty bottle lying near by and threw it at my legs. Blood started to trickle down. I held in the pain for as long as I could. Another one pulled my hair and got a hold of my head then smashed it against the floor multiple times.

It didn't take long before blood appeared before my eyes. Puddles of my blood began to form around me. They picked me up and threw me into the wall. I felt myself trying to grasp onto my breaths. It wouldn't be long before my heart started kicking in.

".... I'm not ... giving him.. up.." I said with as much strength left, enough for her to hear.

"YOU DON'T KNOW WHEN TO FCKING GIVE UP DO YOU!?" She screamed. I could hear her heels tapping on the ground as she made her way over.

"Move!" She pushed the men aside. She kept on punching me, then kicked me with her high heels.She got down and held onto my throat. With the other hand, she pulled out a knife.

"He's mine. And no one else's." She said. I started to feel my eyes giving up, they began to close, slowly. My body started to drift away, all sounds were oblivious to my ears. From this point on, I was unaware of what happened to me.

I was numb from all the torturing they did to my body, but even so, without a doubt, I felt like someone had whispered into my ears.

"Yuki....."

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